Monday, December 2, 2013

I’d do things differently

Dear Charlie,
I love you son more than anything. I know it from the first time when I hold you in my arms. Over the years, your mom passed away. I got drunk, I sent you to farm house instead of school. I wish I'd do things differently to you. I got sick now; doctors told that it will cost a lot for the operation. You want to do it but your wife thinks otherwise. I don’t want to be a burden to you. By the time, you are reading this I would have been far away.


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10 comments:

  1. you have weave his whole life in 100 words,well done

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    1. Thanks cifar. 1st time tried 100 words, glad u like it.

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  2. A troubled relationship between a father and a son brought out very well in just 100 words.

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  3. Excellent one in 100 words :)

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  4. Nice piece - kind of made me a bit sad....

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  5. Very touchy post on the love of a father. Brilliantly done in 100 words:)
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